Thesis Statement: How to Write Strong Thesis Sentence for Your Essay

peakdavid Says:

Oct 14, 2011 - --->> Thanks for the good words, lms. Best of luck with your writing.

woodtrevor Says:

Oct 16, 2011 - im taking a AP history class in my highschool and my teacher has bean saying i have horible theis(which i did) but now after seaing this i cant wait to write my next paper thankyou so much!!! :)

peakdavid Says:

Oct 16, 2011 - -->> Hope it helps, wood. Do you think your teacher will help you rework your thesis so that he/she is satisfied with it?

mrdeeznut1 Says:

Oct 27, 2011 - ty

tannerstell Says:

Oct 29, 2011 - Thank you, is a thesis similar to an open statement in the intro?

peakdavid Says:

Oct 30, 2011 - -->> Sounds like it. I think you may be referring to "open thesis" and "closed thesis"? Those are two types of thesis statements.

TheRandomDudeeee Says:

Feb 7, 2012 - How should the intro paragraph be like? :o I now understand the thesis statement but I'm not sure :OWhat about the body paragraphs? :o what is a good way to support the thesis? :o

peakdavid Says:

Feb 8, 2012 - -->> search on "peakdavid introduction paragraph" and "peakdavid body paragraphs" and my videos on those parts of essay writing should come up. Good luck.

imsolunar Says:

Feb 10, 2012 - I like how he is green screened into all these places, love these videos, informational and cleverly made. :) Glad my writing teacher has me watch these. Plus the guy is very good at what he does, he is good teacher!

parsedwa11 Says:

Feb 15, 2012 - great video David this will probably help all my class mates in our future papers and i suggest you get a better microphone to improve your sound quality.

peakdavid Says:

Feb 15, 2012 - -- Thanks. Agree totally about the mic. My Nady was on last legs. Now use the Azden Pro, which I recommend for teachers doing this--cheap and good quality.

rondamsa Says:

Feb 15, 2012 - Thanks for being clear on this. My school could have just cut it like that, but they just danced around it. The way you talked about the thesis statement is the way I prefer to be taught.

Wesley95501 Says:

Feb 23, 2012 - This helps me a lot.

MrNookman1 Says:

Feb 28, 2012 - that didn't help at all

chanhutch1515 Says:

Mar 5, 2012 - Topic- This videoOpinion- National shameThesis- This video is a shame to Earth.Wow thanks dude. It turns out this video works.

peakdavid Says:

Mar 6, 2012 - -->> What happened to "national"?

Jelly687 Says:

Mar 6, 2012 - I want to genuinely thank you for this video, after watching just a 1:38 I finally understood the meaning of a thesis sentence. Now I can finally write a good paper.

peakdavid Says:

Mar 7, 2012 - -->> That's great to hear, Jelly. Best of luck on your paper!

karlbridge Says:

Mar 26, 2012 - How I wish that I'd seen your presentation before I wrote my Masters' Thesis! I just missed out on a distinction - I think that I'd have done better with a central hub to work from. Simple, but then then the best ideas always are.

jeff46814 Says:

Apr 9, 2012 - Excellent! Thank u so much...Please continue doing those videos...Kudos :)

Jchar55 Says:

Apr 22, 2012 - I SAY GODLIKE!!!! thank you sir.

daniel6093 Says:

Apr 28, 2012 - wouldent a longer thieses state ment bew beter?

peakdavid Says:

Apr 28, 2012 - Try not to get caught up in length for length's sake. Focus on the purpose of the thesis. Let your purpose dictate length. If you are talking about putting your three main points in the thesis, that went out with platform shoes and poodle skirts.

Tracey01B Says:

Apr 30, 2012 - poodle skirts?

peakdavid Says:

Apr 30, 2012 - Yeah, dated myself pretty bad, eh?